Friday, December 30, 2005

Muddy

This is not a very good poem, and it's only the first draft, but I need to get it out there, so bear with me on this one.

...jumbled...
shaken.....
muddy from the
tears i've cried....

...confused...
unsure....
choking on the
tears i've cried....

...hateful...
joyful....
lost in the
tears i've cried....

...revolutionary...
tough....
loving through
the tears i've cried....

how to explain
the way i feel
inside?

Bible verse: Psalm 3:4 "To the Lord I cry aloud, and he answers me from his holy hill."

1 Comments:

Blogger Unknown said...

(mouth droped and im looking for the string to pull it back up) Thats good for only a 1st draft. E-mail me.

3:43 PM  

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